Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Essay 4 Writing Log





Date DueDate StartedDate completedTime spentPosted to the Blog? ✓
Topic SelectionI have selected the topic of my argument, determined my major points, and anticipated the counter arguments11/8







PrewritingWhat do I already know?11/8









What do I still need to know?11/8









What did my research tell me?11/11







OrganizingFinding a focus11/11









Thesis and plan of development
Topic sentences for each paragraph
11/12









Major points, counterpoints, and refutations identified and appropriate data and sources collected.11/18







DraftingFirst draft completed11/20









All relevant points included and sources identified
Quotations Introduced and integrated.









RevisingSecond draft 11/22





Peer review


Transitions show how ideas relate









ProofreadingDraft ready to be assessed for a grade11/22 or 11/29*









*no revisions accepted



Total time



Sunday, November 6, 2011

Essay 4: KQA Chart

Topic: Local Farming
Thesis: Supporting our local farms instead of big farm factories improves local economy, increases the health of the food, and connects members of the community.

 Know

Question

Answer

 Local Farms
Economy
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Big Farms

Health
- less preservatives
-more organic in small farms than organic big farms


Community
-Farmers markets
-job opportunities
-less violence
-more fairs
-stats of towns w/farms are closer




Local Farms
-Stats about towns with more farms
Big Farms


-percent of preservatives in small farms-percent in big farms
-amount of communities activities in farm towns compared



Local Farms


Big Farms












http://www.theage.com.au/news/national/small-farm-towns-expect-the-worst/2006/12/08/1165081153179.html